Friday, June 11, 2010

Using Speech Marks

In writing we are learning to use speech marks correctly in our writing. Two goals we have come up with are:

· Speech marks surround the words that are spoken

· Each new speaker gets a new line



Gigantic Burger - By Temuera

“Wow, that’s HUGE!” shouted Sam, as the big squishy greasy rounded thing was placed on the table.

Sam said “You can’t eat that, it’s way too big for your mouth.”

Liam replied “I can eat it like it’s a cheeseburger.’’ They both stared down at the Big Triple Deluxe Boss Burger, the burger that was twice the size of their heads. So Liam attempted to take a bite of this monster of a burger. Then Liam took a gigantic bite into the burger.

“Delicious!” said Liam with half of the burger still in his mouth.

Then this rumbling noise got louder and louder, and then, POP! Liam’s Fat belly popped right out of his t-shirt.

Sam yelled, “Woo hoo! Dude you’re a fatty!”


10 comments:

  1. Far Tem I like the way you gave each speaker a new line and nice video :) :)

    By Temuera

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  2. hae Tem I like the way you gave each of your character an interesting line and i liked on your video the way you clapped your hands at the end what was that meant to be a cut line or something anyway nice video and nice writing P.S give Sam and Liam some acting lessons lol!!(Nio hard feelings guys!! haha!!)

    Kitana!!

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  3. I like your video tem, stop laughing through the video, liam I'm a fan. by ben

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  4. nice acting guys and I liked the way Liam said "cheeseburger" big fan, big fan.


    by Sam

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  5. Mean video Tem!!! I like the way you used expression and detail so I could make an image of the story in my mind.

    >ERIK<

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  6. Cool video Tem.

    Brandon

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  7. hha looks like funnn ! TEM NUMBER TEN !

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  8. you did an awesome job Tem
    you did a great job on the movie tem

    by olivia and Hannah-leigh
    Rm15

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  9. TEM NUMBER TEN!! NICE VIDEO TEM

    !!PURU!!

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