At school for writing we have been writing paragraphs our learning intention was to use well chosen verbs[A doing word]
As I lifted the cold hard shiny sphere to my mouth I took a big bite out of the fragrant juicy apple. CRUNCH!!! Flavours swirled around my mouth. The wet oozing liquid dribbled down my face. The boiling hot sun evaporated the fruity waters from my chin.
BY ROSIE AND GEORGINA
As I lifted the cold hard shiny sphere to my mouth I took a big bite out of the fragrant juicy apple. CRUNCH!!! Flavours swirled around my mouth. The wet oozing liquid dribbled down my face. The boiling hot sun evaporated the fruity waters from my chin.
BY ROSIE AND GEORGINA
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