At school for writing we have been writing paragraphs ourlearning intention wasto use well chosen verbs[A doing word]
As I lifted the cold hard shiny sphere to my mouth I took a big bite out of the fragrant juicy apple. CRUNCH!!! Flavours swirled around my mouth. The wet oozing liquid dribbled down my face. The boiling hot sun evaporated the fruity waters from my chin.
Earlier in the term we managed to fit all of the class into 4 hula hoops laid on the ground. The on going team building challenge was on to fit into 3.
We tried again at the end of Term 1 and it was great to see some of the leaders in the class come to the fore. They encouraged people into the right places and we succeeded at fitting everyone into 3 hoops. This is only the second class in five years to get down to three so it is a great achievement. We only managed it because we have some people who stepped up to lead the task and because we have a good group of kids in Room 14 who are willing to work together.